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| Document Information |
| Title |
NISO RP-15-201x, Recommended Practices for Online Supplemental Journal Article Materials, Part B: Technical Recommendations |
| File Name |
RP-15-201x Suppl_TWG_draft_for_comments_final-rev.pdf |
State |
Draft |
| Date Added |
2012-08-06 11:10:25 |
Revision Number |
1 |
| Submitter Name |
Cynthia Hodgson |
Size |
256K |
| Comment Information |
| Summary |
reference to <oXygen/> XML Editor |
State (Disposition) |
New (Unresolved) |
| Date Added |
2012-09-07 19:44:53 |
Last Updated |
2012-09-07 19:44:53 |
| Submitter Name |
Kevin Hawkins |
Assigned To |
Unassigned |
| Company Name |
MPublishing, University of Michigan Library |
Response |
None |
| Interest Category |
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Category |
N/A |
| Origin |
Public Review |
Section, Page, Line |
Section 2.2, Page 3 |
| Item |
N/A |
Item Description |
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| Submitter Comment |
You currently use the phrase "oXygen-generated diagrams and content models" without naming the program correctly. It's also syntactically ambiguous since it sounds like the content models were generated by <oXygen/> XML Editor as well, though I'm not sure you meant this. |
| Submitter Proposed Solution |
I suggest rephrasing as "diagrams and content models generated by the <oXygen/> XML Editor". If the content models aren't generated by this program, then the sentence should instead end with "as well as in the form of the Tag Library, diagrams generated by <oXygen/> XML Editor, and content models". |
