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Comment #00236 - reference to <oXygen/> XML Editor - RP-15-201x Suppl_TWG_draft_for_comments_final-rev.pdf (revision #1)
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Comment 236
Addressed (Unresolved)
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 NISO RP-15-201x, Recommended Practices for Online Supplemental Journal Article Materials, Part B:... (Revision 1) |
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Comment Submitted by Kevin Hawkins 2012-09-07 19:44:53 |
You currently use the phrase "oXygen-generated diagrams and content models" without naming the program correctly. It's also syntactically ambiguous since it sounds like the content models were generated by <oXygen/> XML Editor as well, though I'm not sure you meant this. |
| Submitter Proposed Solution |
I suggest rephrasing as "diagrams and content models generated by the <oXygen/> XML Editor". If the content models aren't generated by this program, then the sentence should instead end with "as well as in the form of the Tag Library, diagrams generated by <oXygen/> XML Editor, and content models". |
| Developer Response |
thank you for your input on the draft for Part B of NISO RP-15-2013, Recommended Practices for Online Supplemental Journal Article Materials. Your comment was carefully considered by the Technical Working Group in their review and subsequent revision of the Recommended Practice before publication, which occurred late last week after approvals from both NISO and NFAIS leadership. Responses to comments can be found at http://www.niso.org/apps/group_public/document.php?document_id=9757 The published Recommended Practice can be found at http://www.niso.org/publications/rp/rp-15-2013 thank you for your support of NISO and NFAIS. Nettie Lagace, NISO Associate Director for Programs |